Why I said what I said to Fahimy

I think Fahimy has a good essay. She explained the personification, repetition, and color of her poem. However, she did not consider in her paper the instructions of her professor. According to her professor they are to explain what the tone and symbolism of their poem. She did not mention anything about the tone and symbolism, so I think that is the major problem in her paper. She does not have to change the whole paper I think what she could do is just add in details and in one paragraph the tone and symbolism. She could also remove some of her points that are not really necessary for the paper. I was not really able to give her a good comment, but if I’m to go back this is what I would say to her.